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Night-time Wonderer
Contributed by
stellar
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Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 01:16:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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So I asked a question to the skies
And I waited here for the stars' reply
I layed below until the light of dawn
And after every glimpse of moon was gone
And I plan to return again tonight
When darkness dims all out of sight
For I cannot shake the question that steals my sleep
Whose answer I know will grant me peace
So I will sit under heaven as long as it takes
Until the burst of daylight breaks
And then I hope the truth I will know
To hear in the breeze everytime that it blows
Copyright ©
stellar
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2005-11-10 01:16:56]
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Re: Night-time Wonderer
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:26:07 AM AEST
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| I like this it is very nice. |
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Re: Night-time Wonderer
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by PLformalyknownasPpaul on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:34:16 AM AEST
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| simple,searching and effective |
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Re: Night-time Wonderer
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 07:14:19 PM AEST
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Beautiful effort. I do think it asks for a little more at the end, if time brings you any more to give it. But that may be just me. Well done, in all.
Andrew |
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