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I'm a machine
Contributed by
emokid
on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:24:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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rip out my throat
and Ill apologize
for every drop that
lands on your new shoes
Im a machine
no tears
no blood
no feelings
just use me
Keep me guessing
what goes on
in your head
dont tell me
that one night
means nothing to you
Im a machine
no tears
no blood
no feelings
just use me
Im your slave
just show me what to do
to keep you happy
dont worry about the pain
thats my problem anyways
Im a machine
no tears
no blood
no feelings
just use me
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emokid
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2005-11-10 02:24:27]
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Re: I'm a machine
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by SeanMcHaney on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:28:20 AM AEST
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| I like the imagry, well done! |
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Re: I'm a machine
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by Jane_Doe on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:45:35 AM AEST
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| I love the first verse. It's a very powerful and painful poem but I really like it. |
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Re: I'm a machine
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by Drmbeliever on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 02:45:38 AM AEST
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| nice one! see i almost comment on everyone of yours...lol *hugs* |
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Re: I'm a machine
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by little_genna on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 03:15:52 AM AEST
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Interesting layout of the poem it works really well with the words. I've felt like this so many times before...mostly when my ex used to use me for his pleasure and push me around when I annoyed him... there is soo much pain in this poem
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