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blurred vision

Contributed by hearts4pain on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 04:02:32 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

something deep inside
a moment like this
silence whispers in the dark
some piano playing from a far
cold chills tickle down my spine
fear creeping
thoughts lingering
drifting away
all feelings numb
losing my grip
falling faster
faster
where is the bottom
to this incessant quick sand
morning awakes me
sunlight opens my eyes
reality hits me hard
something
kept me alive

Copyright © hearts4pain ... [ 2005-11-10 16:02:32]
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Re: blurred vision (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 04:25:27 PM AEST
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great write i hope you find the thing that you are looking for
R.M.Wilder

Re: blurred vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Live2Die on Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 04:41:12 PM AEST
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Deep, emotional, vivid imagery. I really like it, I hope you find what you need to stop this. Keep up the writing

~Riisa

Re: blurred vision (User Rating: 1 )
by Kayden on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 03:51:29 PM AEST
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Wow, this is kinda short and freakin incredible... Wow great job!!! Geezz this was awesome....

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