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Wanting To Run Away
Contributed by
pixie
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Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 06:42:07 PM in AEST
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Wanting to run far away from it all,
Next time I hear it ring I wont answer its call,
I will hide down here all alone,
Sheltering from depression when its full blown.
Its a life long game of cat and mouse,
With me never living alone in my dark house,
Always someone lurking in the background,
Moving inside me never making a sound.
I run and pick up my pace,
All the while depression laughs in my face,
I have begged and I have pleaded,
Never being given all that I have needed.
The harder I run , the harder the fight,
I pray for day and fear the night,
Empty shadows climb my soul,
Ill always be half and never a whole.
The last piece is missing to my jigsaw,
Laying in the gutter I am his whore,
Chained to his black, black heart,
Silent tears fall as my world falls apart.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-11-10 18:42:07]
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by weepingprophet on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 07:00:52 PM AEST
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The intensity in this peice was astonishing. I found that at times the flow seemed disturbed a little but it regained its accuracy. the last stanza was the weakest in my opinion. Though i enjoyed the revelations in the last stanza i felt it just a bit out of place with the rest of the peice. My favorit line was "empty shadows climb my soul". it was vivid and very emotive. thanks for a great read!
~to know loss is to experience the greatest joy and then to have that joy snatched from your hands as you try desperately to hold on-now, to know death, is to never let go~weepingprophet |
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by Shattered_soul on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 07:07:58 PM AEST
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WOW! thats really all I can say, I also go through depression, and it does get really bad, that is why I started writing poetry, because it gets so bad sometimes that poetry is my only escape, I hope it eases up on you, and keep writing in your poetry.
With love,
S.S |
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by Kie-Kie on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 07:18:22 PM AEST
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Oh sweety *hugs* you're not alone in this. There's several people, even on this site alone, that will help you if you need us *hugs*
Beautiful poem, but I'm sorry it came from such a horrible feeling
Love always,
~Kiela~ |
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 10:56:38 PM AEST
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A great inner reavelation of secret feelings and haunting emotions, relentless in there
posession of your heart, beautiful as always
pix . . .
((((((pixie)))))))
Ben |
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 01:35:02 AM AEST
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Wow I can definitely relate to this poem the
emotions and dark thoughts were expressed
very well and it brought back reminders of a
very dark place in my life. Notice how I said
"reminders" there IS an end to your pain, but
you need to place your trust and faith in
Jesus He is the only one that can take away
the pain you have. Yeah good poem and I
hope you find your way past the depression
very soon. E-mail me or PM me if you have
the time.
*Hugs*
Joel |
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 12:13:40 PM AEST
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| awwwwww pixie....so sad and dark....I wish you well. and this is really well written! Glad to see you posting again!!!! |
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 06:37:23 PM AEST
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Awwwww, sweetie...
I agree with Kiela, there are people here who care for you. We're here for you...
This is so terrible, Krissie, you're a special person, don't let depression win, because we know how great you really are.
A good write hun,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 12:29:43 PM AEST
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awww hugs
I hope you get out of this depression soon. |
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Re: Wanting To Run Away
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by Benny14 on
Thursday, 2nd February 2006 @ 11:11:33 PM AEST
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well itd be redundant to praise your poem, but i just dont give a crap, so very well done! i loved it.
-Ben |
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