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Forever
Contributed by
powerlinez
on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:35:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Ever since I layed my eyes on you
I knew you were the one
I met you at that party
Were we were having fun
Over the years I really loved you
We used all our heart and their flames
All the way through high school
You were the one I claimed
Now That We have gotten this far
Our love is divine
Our love is a burning star
Would you be mine
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2005-11-10 20:35:13]
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Re: Forever
(User Rating: 1 )
by Minus_Blindfold on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 08:42:21 PM AEST
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| short...but catchy. Nice job! |
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Re: Forever
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by majinZack on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 09:27:25 PM AEST
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| I like it...it sounds like you really love the person its about. i really liked the last 4 lines...its interesting the way you worded your poem...nice job ^_^ |
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