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Forgive me
Contributed by
suprasurfer
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Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 04:49:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Once forgotten
Once remembered
A single tear
in the cold of winter
there's no one left
is no one right
A single tear
in the dark of night
Some people laugh
Why do I cry
A single tear
in the absence of life
For all my wrongs
That stretch me thinner
infinite tears
from the heart of this sinner
Copyright ©
suprasurfer
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2005-11-11 16:49:49]
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Re: Forgive me
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 05:13:06 PM AEST
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An emotion packed write filled with such sadness. Chin up and may ur days ahead be bright and merry. A touching, heartfelt and well expressed poem. Well done.
*heartfelt hugs for u*
sue |
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Re: Forgive me
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by Poetic_Influence on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 08:12:54 PM AEST
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| Dont cry, God will forgive your sins, you dont even have to ask |
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