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The battle of lies
Contributed by
poetic_influence
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Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 08:54:51 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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These people They lie to me The smile to my face And then hurt me when they say goodbye to me They spread words around so foul and cruel And try to play me like a fool Why is this the way of the world Why must they let hate unfurl And even when I try to "Be above it" They just smile like I'm weak...And i know they love it They know it hurts Its what they do And it works That is why they persue Even your best friend Would stab you if she or he hd the chance "Friends til the end" ...........I wish I had known in advance They will suck your courage dry Until you cant even cry Cant even have the thoughts to wonder why I call them the minds apocalypse Because they take it over until its destroyed They have no need for bombs or battle ships They're words and action are all they need deployed The battle of hate And what a battle it is One second your life is great And the next second you no longer want to live
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Re: The battle of lies
(User Rating: 1 ) by fielding88 on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 08:38:30 PM AEST (User
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This reads like a life statement, some nice thoughts in here, but perhaps giving it a bit more structure to supply more of an impact on the reader. Happy posting! |
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