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With me
Contributed by
loopylou
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Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 05:15:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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underneath the dirt
and the secrecy
under ground
its where your find me...
lost in the world
just sweeping the tide
always aware
just watching you with these grey eyes
and we may not be
perfect
peechy
or pure
but were real
and that means more
close your eyes
and forget the tainted dreams
walk in the real world with me...
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loopylou
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2005-11-12 17:15:19]
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Re: With me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 05:41:10 PM AEST
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Sometimes it's not as easy as we think, to bring ourselves out of the little words we create. The worlds where everything is as we want, where were safe and free from harm of any sort. While that world eventually crumbles, it's a cage of no release, at least for some, who tend to never find there way out till it's too late, and they've been tainted from the crumbling. Great write. Hope to see more soon.
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Re: With me
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 11:08:36 PM AEST
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That's a beautiful message. One of my favorite kind, and very well expressed.
Keep writing, and walking in the real world (really fraught with wonders).
Andrew |
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