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If you could only see
Contributed by
Formerly_known
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Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 06:19:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You see her on the street
she looks like a normal girl
but if u only knew she wasnt
You look at her and she smiles
but if you only knew behind that
smile is a broken heart
that has been broken too many times
Guys have used her
Her Dad abused her
her mother couldnt stop it
and her sister ignored it all
so she hides it all
Ashamed
afraid to tell anyone what she has been through
she hides in the bathroom
grabs a knife and begins to cut
she thinks that all this is all her fault
and belives the blood will make it all disapear
but it doesnt make it go away
she still feels like it happend because she was a step child
Will she ever find that one person
that one guy who will help her understand and
help her see that it wasnt her fault?
Anyone at all?
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Re: If you could only see
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by flamingblade on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 06:36:20 PM AEST
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this poem made me choke up .
this is really powerful
keep it up.
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Re: If you could only see
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 12th November 2005 @ 11:18:02 PM AEST
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Honest and powerful words. I hope you do find that special one, but remember, there is no perfect human these days, much as we may need one. Renewal begins in your own heart, between you and your Maker.
All the best.
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Re: If you could only see
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by spazie on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 12:44:53 AM AEST
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i know a girl like that
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Re: If you could only see
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by Alibi on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 01:56:43 AM AEST
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I'm relieved to hear you are "happier than ever" now dear. This is so very sad and full of emotion. Such frankness to your thoughts. Good for you for writing this, and congratulations for conquering those demons! Superb poem. Best wishes.
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