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too deep
Contributed by
SmileSkinDeep
on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 01:29:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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as i stuble through the darkness
as i cry
as i want someone to hold
as i wanted to die
there's nothing for me
crimson in the dark
i stayed only to bleed
the break down of my broken heart
my soul tickled
by the thought
my soul cut
by the blade
why?
the question bruning through my veins
spilling out my wrists
bruning throught my pain
coming out my fists
why? i dont know why
i don't like my life
but somehow i dont want to die
it's not like everyone else says
"just to know your alive"
it takes me away from reality
and time brings me back again
i know i'm alive
the pain reminds me
time after time
i have to be alive but i question it
when i wait to bleed
the skin open
my wrists so painfully sore
i still don't know
why i keep coming back for more
i wish
i could feel like i used to
like my first time
i want something to make sense
something other than pain and lies
Copyright ©
SmileSkinDeep
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2005-11-13 13:29:11]
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Re: too deep
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:24:48 PM AEST
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| hehe.....ya know how it says "stuble" well its supposed to say "stumble" |
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Re: too deep
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by lilblkcat on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 10:19:46 PM AEST
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| your poem is great. its very real and i believe probably describes many cutters true feelings. thank you for putting those feelings into words. |
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Re: too deep
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 06:16:30 PM AEST
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good poem april, really reflects the pain, and for your own good i hope you stopped. =P
~natalya |
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