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The Dead
Contributed by
His_Infernal_Majesty
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Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 02:16:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Dead in mind, dead in heart
The shadows of life, the world falls apart.
Living but not alive,
Pain of a stigmata; Crucified.
Amplified by all the sorrow and regret,
Finally see's a way out, Surrending.
The temptation, the Dead.
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2005-11-13 14:16:24]
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Re: The Dead
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by grim6669 on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:03:11 PM AEST
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this poem was flippin' awsome!!!
*~amber~* |
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Re: The Dead
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by JenJen on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 03:49:49 PM AEST
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| short but to the point |
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Re: The Dead
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 04:22:11 PM AEST
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| Very clear and concise. Very emotive. I belive this is one of the best poems on suicide I've read on this site. |
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Re: The Dead
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by zealousnatalie on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 11:11:21 PM AEST
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| "Living but not alive" is sometimes so true. It is as if sometimes we are merely existing. And true is the way death is tempting when sorrow and mysery stare you in the eyes, escape..... This is very thought provoking! |
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