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just something i jotted down and loved it
Contributed by
lostwithoutyou
on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:13:47 PM in AEST
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I threw a vace of memories
For nothing but to shatter,
Shatter like the memories
That really had no matter.
Copyright ©
lostwithoutyou
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2005-11-14 12:13:47]
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Re: just something i jotted down and loved it
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by XxXMcCathyXxX on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:27:48 PM AEST
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| Wow, very short and rhyme-ie. I like it |
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Re: just something i jotted down and loved it
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by Dri on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 01:26:55 PM AEST
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| this is short, but so good. i kind of wish you had kept on with that train of thought. |
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Re: just something i jotted down and loved it
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 07:37:03 PM AEST
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Expand, expand!
(if you can)
Andrew |
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Re: just something i jotted down and loved it
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by Wachumiri on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 06:36:36 PM AEST
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Yes, yes, no write more! It's there, just waiting...
Take care.
David |
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