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I see you...
Contributed by
XxXMcCathyXxX
on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 12:25:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I see you standing there,
In the middle of nowhere.
Clutching a knife,
Ready to take your life.
I see you every night,
Looking alright.
But you're smile is fake,
even when you're awake.
I see you everyday,
Not too far away.
I reach out to you
But you disappear out of view.
I see you standing there,
In the middle of nowhere.
Clutching a knife,
Ready to take your life.
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XxXMcCathyXxX
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2005-11-14 12:25:06]
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Re: I see you...
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 24th October 2006 @ 09:23:03 PM AEST
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| wow that's depressing....if its real i hope your friend sees that life is worth living! you can save him/her...your poem is convincing of that |
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Re: I see you...
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by MandiLee on
Wednesday, 25th October 2006 @ 05:21:23 PM AEST
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| wow an amazing poem! your a great artist well poet... |
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