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Karrens World
Contributed by
Kazzy1231
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Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 04:31:09 PM in AEST
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Lonely and empty with no1 but me.
It's nice when I want 2 be alone.
But when I don't want 2 be alone I have no1 2 talk 2 apart from a stone.
I once lived in the real world.
Then I twirled.
Twirled in2 a whole new world.
I tried twirling again 2 go back.
But all I got was a sack.
So here I am stuck in Karrens world.
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Re: Karrens World
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by Kazzy1231 on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 04:36:16 PM AEST
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| If you hadn't guessed Karren is my real name. |
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Re: Karrens World
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 05:24:21 PM AEST
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Kazzy this is very nice poem. I have empathy for you dear, I too live many different worlds, but I have control over mine. If you are lonely, you go out and see who you can view.
Make a new friend or two,.................
Never wait for someone else to come rescue you.........go to them first.........and that way you'll never again lonely........
Warm love
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Re: Karrens World
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 09:40:54 AM AEST
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| You have a new fan in me Karren! I have read a few of your poems today and I think they are really good, they get to the point quickly and are just brilliant. Thanks for a good read. |
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