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She Is Woman
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 05:53:21 PM in AEST
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She glides against my skin in pale moonlit summer silhouette
Eyes flicker with fire, burn deep into my raging soul
Whispers soft words of entrancement, like bee to sweet nectar
I am swallowed in her kiss, the honey of her lips
Her touch, the warm caress that soothes, banishes all doubt
Relaxes me, I bathe in the hot spring of her loving arms
Become submerged in the river that flows from her fingertips
Wallow in the depth of love, swim in the pool of embrace
As the clock ticks long into the hours of early morning
Two hearts as one beat with every passing second
Time serves merely to mark the growing intensity
Passion poured from a giving heart, received without demand
Finally, intoxicated, eyes close to summon the dark
Dreams roll in like lowland mist as slumber claims its place
When I wake I will still be dreaming as I open up my eyes
Still sleeping, cradled in my arms, she is woman
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Re: She Is Woman
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:27:34 PM AEST
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wow that is beautiful.
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Re: She Is Woman
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 09:53:48 PM AEST
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Steve, this is such beauty in words.....very well done !! love it....
This is me fave part:
Her touch, the warm caress that soothes, banishes all doubt
Relaxes me, I bathe in the hot spring of her loving arms
Become submerged in the river that flows from her fingertips
Wallow in the depth of love, swim in the pool of embrace
Such beauty............*sigh*
huggssss
Nats
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Re: She Is Woman
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 01:38:41 PM AEST
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Reminds me of the Summer of 1985 at the Buffaloe River in August under a full moon.
Thanks for bringing very pleasent memories to my own heart-n-soul.
Another masterpeice!
huggs,
emy |
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Re: She Is Woman
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by xxbreathlessx on
Thursday, 20th July 2006 @ 11:13:05 PM AEST
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| breathtakingly beautiful! it immediately draws in the reader to your world. i loved it! |
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Re: She Is Woman
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 06:13:48 PM AEST
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| 100 comment your the one. i loved this and was so blown. this was the one i was waiting for and it touch me. thank you for sharing. i will read more. |
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Re: She Is Woman
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by needledancing on
Tuesday, 15th May 2007 @ 09:06:23 PM AEST
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You have definately captured all those who seek a definition of passion and respect for it.
Very intoxicatingly well written.
Many more dreams may you put to pen.
Loved it. |
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Re: She Is Woman
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by SilverRain on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 07:15:18 PM AEST
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So much in this that spoke to me...great choice of words and awesome flow...."become submerged in the river that flows from her fingertips" - awesome...know exaxtly what you are talking about but never been able to put it into words.
I applaud you for a beautiful and touching piece. |
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