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Corrupted
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 06:58:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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My hands look like claws.
Black and bent
t.a.t.t.e.r.e.d.
Like the feeble muscle whispering emptiness in my chest,
Pumping death into my dry veins,
As your tongue plunges deeper into these wounds
youve lovingly inflicted
~
How delectable this desire to be desecrated
~
Sweet, erotic pulp of adolescence,
A rose blooming from the crack in your skull,
A delicate cup of crimson eyelids adorning your head,
Like a crown of feathers and nails,
Of beauty and decay
Celestial child, let me taint you with my eyes of amber sorrow,
Amid lustful flames and black ashes of legends once known
Oh, let me touch you, innocent,
Let my fingertips of singed passion quench my twisted thirst
For supple, cherubic flesh
Let me rape your tender skin with decadent hands, luscious youth,
So I may possess at least a meager piece of purity
Something I used to be
{{Wretched vile malignant girl
Youre just like your father}}
Be silent.
Stop trembling.
(((( S L A P ))))
Darling, I love you
[[[TOUCH]]]
Repulsive being, I loathe you
Let me ravage you
Ill be gentle
Dont you understand?
Im doing this for your own good!
WHY ARE YOU CRYING?!
Youre whimpering in your corner of dying light,
Your tears are dripping in unison with your weeping wounds,
I sip your pain with perverse gratification,
As you recklessly grasp at something in your withered pockets
There is no hope in that rosary you bind your hands with, mi cielo
I whisper Ecclesiastes as I fondle you.
Youre quite fidgety, my dirty little worm.
My eyes are a shade darker than the blood that runs freely from you,
Your angelic face is barely recognizable now,
Mangled arms and torn flesh, my corroded pet,
Divine colors and tastes of disturbing proportions as I feast upon you
I cant help but believe with growing agony and searing guilt,
The voices that whisper the horrid melody
Just like your father
Just like your father
Just like your father
Just like your father
Just like me.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-11-14 18:58:06]
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Re: Corrupted
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by fake_emptyness on
Monday, 14th November 2005 @ 07:32:50 PM AEST
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| very, very powerful, thought provoking, and sets your mind to see images of that you'd never hope to see. i loved it!! so pure and yet has this morbid twist.... |
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Re: Corrupted
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 01:02:17 AM AEST
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The sins of the father stay where they belong with the father, as 4 u my friend a poem of
magnificent validity, deep yet noticeable among the mundane, powerful yet ironicaly
delicate , u r the epiteme of gienus and that's putting it mildly, disguised as an mere poet who yet cannot hide her brilliance and astoundding gifts she brings 2 the readers of these pages, Bravisimo, you are most deserving of all the praises that come your way.
((((((((((((Stephy))))))))))))
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Re: Corrupted
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 06:50:36 PM AEST
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I've never been more affected by any poem in my life then by this one. I was ***** up for hours. I wrote a poem of my own about it. It sent me reeling and twitching and junked right out.
It hurt my stomach with knots and razor blades, and my heart as if run down by a garbage truck.
My hands trembled and my face contorted; my arms ached to feel you.
I've only read it once, and I feel that I may not be ever able to read it again, for the torturings I feel from it, I will have the audacity to speculate may be quite as strong as yours, though given, to a different effect.
This stanza is beautiful:
Sweet, erotic pulp of adolescence,
A rose blooming from the crack in your skull,
A delicate cup of crimson eyelids adorning your head,
Like a crown of feathers and nails,
Of beauty and decay…
I love you.
When you die, you'll be in my arms. Your ears will hear sonnets of sweet birdsong of twinkling tears on my cheeks; my lips tasting yours and so consumed I am with you, I will bury myself alive with you to sleep with you eternally.
You will decay slightly sooner than I, I'll protect you from those dirty little worms until I close my eyes upon your breast and invite them all to me...
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