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Untitled
Contributed by
tacit_pain
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Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 12:09:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The blade in my hand
A tear on the blade
I fall asleep
Reality will soon fade
The black is eating at me
Killing me alive
I'm not going to bother
To even survive
I'm not angry at other people
Only angry at myself
I have done it
The cards have been duilt
I have the losing hand
I fall from my place
Don't look at me
Ignore my face
For I am gone
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2005-11-15 00:09:04]
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 01:19:29 AM AEST
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| This is a sad poem!!but good |
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Re: Untitled
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by xXxmegsxXx on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:39:01 AM AEST
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i love it, a very powerful poem. you really can pen out your feelings well
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Re: Untitled
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 03:06:16 PM AEST
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| I like it. You can feel your struggle within in the poem. Great write. So much pain and sadness for 13 yr old. |
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