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I Confess
Contributed by
slayer_015
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Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 01:40:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Upon the swaying cob-webs tread
The lusts of men in words unsaid
Where noone hears the heart that bred
The whispered love,now withered dead.
Should I now share their withered fate
Remaining in this present state
Where all happiness as of late
Has gone the way of staunch debate?
I shall not share this clouded day
Of sad fools clad in loveless gray
Where lifeless ghosts of these same pray
For loves lost sun,gone far away.
I with this loving mouth confess
That you I will always caress
And pray the lord that he may bless
This humble love which we possess.
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Re: I Confess
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:23:00 AM AEST
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THIS WAS A GREAT POEM.. I LIKE IT..
GOOD JOB!
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Re: I Confess
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by Suzy on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 03:03:40 PM AEST
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| Love the poem..it's sweet and sad all at the same time. |
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Re: I Confess
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by Aquaelius on
Thursday, 12th January 2006 @ 09:58:32 PM AEST
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This is real nice...
"the lust of men in words unsaid." definitely like this line. Very strong. I lust all the time, but god forbid I say it. Good write.
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