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Through Death-walker's Eyes
Contributed by
dthwlkr
on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 08:03:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Staring into the pit you call life Beyond the blinding veil of dark light
I stare, stare at all thats around me Cant see, But I feel you, Blinded, cant see
Cant live, no in your world, cant live Feeding on my love my love, you, none to give Cant turn blind to your hypocrisy Its you, disillusioned not me, cant you see
As I breathe the air around you, I suffocate Cauz you reek, oh you reek of hate
But things were different at the start And my love, you still had a heart But soon the black sun rose over the screaming sky My own light fading as the day turns evanescent..oh why
Madness stirs in every heart, sanity fades, I cry Mothers kill their new-born, blacker turns the dark, no trace of tears, yetI cry Self-pity, desperation flows filling my veins with loathing for my own Is all lost??? Oh, for I hear even the heaven groan
Will the flowers ever bloom under the shadow of the dark hood? Will the blood-stained, crimson moon ever shineI wonder if it could And I wonder where did the smiles go Watching the destruction and the fallens lust grow
As I walk through their scarred, shredded souls They stare with minds laid bare and dark as holes For I still carry within me the light Though diminished, yet pure, however slight
Today though I fade away, searching into the oblivion But one day I shall return, with my own pure sun Upon the darkness of the fallen it shall descend Banishing the corrupt, over the skies it shall ascend
When finally the dark deeds are undone and the black sun unmade When the flowers again shall shine beneath the silver moon never to fade Then I shall search for you Close and no matter how far, I shall search for you
Never your trust will I betray From this darkness I shall deliver you to our day Cauz I know, from the ashes I shall resurrect the sun For I know Im the defiant. Yes the chosen one.
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dthwlkr
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2005-11-15 08:03:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Through Death-walker's Eyes
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 06:48:37 PM AEST (User
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This poem had it's literary moments (third to last stanza, particularly), but it would be better if it was a lot shorter and more focused.
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