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A BETTER MAN
Contributed by
BRAT
on
Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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AS 12TH GRADE CAME ALL THE DETROIT GUYS PLAYED NOTHING BUT GAMES, NOT A GAME OF BASKETBALL, NOT A GAME OF DARTS.
THIS GAME HURTS IT WAS PLAYED WITH MY HEART.
YEAH, GUYS COME AND THEN THEY GO.
NOW HE'S HERE, HE SAYS HE LOVES ME AND THAT HE CARES.
TIME PASSES......HIS LOVE STARTS TO DISAPPEAR. HE DOESN'T LOVE ME NOR DOES HE CARE.
I'M ALL ALONE, I FEEL A TEAR, AS I CRY MY CUZ WIPES MY TEARS, "KEEP YOUR CHIN UP," SHE SAYS, "AND DON'T BE SAD. FIND YOURSELF A BETTER MAN."
A FEW WEEKS WENT BY, I'M BETTER NOW, HE'S NOTHING BUT A REJECTAFIED JERK!
I TOOK A LOOK IN THE MIRROR, TO FIND A SMILE AND NO MORE TEARS. AND ONLY BECAUSE I HAD LISTENED TO MY CUZ, I KEPT MY CHIN UP, I DIDN'T STAY SAD. I DID WHAT SHE TOLD ME.... I FOUND ME A BETTER MAN!!!
THX JD!!!!
Copyright ©
BRAT
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2003-01-22 23:40:00]
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Re: A BETTER MAN
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 10:01:45 AM AEST
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| You Go,Who needs him! Love is so(tough to find but when you find it look out! Great one! Christina |
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Re: A BETTER MAN
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by OreO on
Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:42:19 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful Brat...and that's right who needs him, true love will come your way for sure and when it does hold on to it with all you have...this is so inspirational....i love this one...thanks for sharing it...
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Re: A BETTER MAN
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by THEFORGOTTENSOUL on
Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 05:54:09 PM AEST
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way to go!!!!!
guys do come and go
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