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Leaving
Contributed by
Poetic_Influence
on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:48:30 AM in AEST
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I did steal your heart
As yes I did break it
I tore it apart
Until you couldnt make it
The smile on my face
Yes it was real
I ruined your life
And happiness is all that I feel
I spit in your face
And then I laughed
I changed all the locks just incase
You thought this love would last
I told all my friends
How bad you were in bed
No tears will be shed
I'm not the bad guy
Nor will I ever be
I never lied
So be out of here on the count of three
Call me a *****
Call me what you'd like
But that doesn't change
Who you were with last night
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Re: Leaving
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:36:17 AM AEST
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hey this is a very good write i like it bye
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Re: Leaving
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by Vermilion on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:40:00 AM AEST
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Loving it. Revenge is great. I'm not feeling the title (a bit too average), but the poem in itself was very good.
Blessed be,
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Re: Leaving
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 07:02:24 PM AEST
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So you finally dropped your facade, SkillzWayAboveYours? About time. How long since you posted on your other account? And to think, you denied it so adamantly. HA!
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