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Contributed by
deathbringer
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Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 09:56:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I hate , I love , I hate you again
Becouse you cursed me ...
And you blessed me ...
With love and hatred.
I love you and I must cry out
My feelings ...
You own my heart
You own my soul and will
You own all of me and all of my dreams.
Please go now and never look back
Upon my damned soul ...
What am i doing ? Am i sending you away?
No .. please do not leave me alone ...
In my desperate desolation ,
Please do not go ...
Becouse you'll take away my will to live
Please do not go ...
Becouse without you I am ...
A king without crown
Without you I am
Darkness without light ..
Please come back
And curse me some more with your love
Come back and fill my damned heart ...
With love , desire , or even hatred
Just come back and fill my soul
And let me not fade away from existance...
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2005-11-15 09:56:46]
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Re: no title
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by Poetic_Influence on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 10:38:16 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: no title
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by Vermilion on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 11:37:26 AM AEST
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A few mistakes - for example, it is 'because' and not 'becouse', and I is spelt with a capital.
Apart from that, an enjoyable read. Displaying confusion well.
Good luck in future writing.
Blessed be,
Mili xxx |
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by His_Infernal_Majesty on
Tuesday, 15th November 2005 @ 03:46:03 PM AEST
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| I think the peom was great personally. Expresses well theefects of others on our own lives. |
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Re: no title
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by b_rand on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 12:36:49 AM AEST
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| this was incredible ... i'm experiencing very similar feelings lately |
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