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No Ones Love
Contributed by
His_Infernal_Majesty
on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 02:53:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My world is covered in darkness.
No one important lives there just me, Solitary.
My world is where no ones love lies.
And the souls of the unloved die.
My world is a place, I hide.
Endure the cold, knowing you lied.
Look into the mirrior,
And hate the person looking back.
For the look that I myself lack.
Crushed by the pain,
To a best friend stab in the back.
The world before wasa once a happy place.
full of love, dreams, hope and faith.
But now im no ones love,
and lost in this cruel dark world,
with no love to embrace.
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His_Infernal_Majesty
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2005-11-16 14:53:37]
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Re: No Ones Love
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by lostrelic on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 03:05:27 PM AEST
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well i know that feeling all to well. if she left with him then its a sign you really didnt need them i hope things get better nice write
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Re: No Ones Love
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by Poetic_Influence on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 03:13:46 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: No Ones Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 04:16:17 PM AEST
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So sorry for all the pain and suffering. Chin up and look ahead. May you find someone who is worthy of your love.
A sad, but very well written piece of poetry.
*hugs*
sue |
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Re: No Ones Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th November 2005 @ 09:42:41 PM AEST
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| well some one who did that to you is not your friend and never was...and a girl who would do that doesnt deserve to be with anybody...hope all goes well for you..good poem |
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