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Desvanecer
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
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Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 03:59:17 AM in AEST
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Lifepoems
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Exposta ao tempo Despida no vento Sem ser Sem querer
Raz arrastada Sem alma Sem nada Sem alvorecer
Leito desfeito Sem marcas, afeito Sem noite, sem dia Sem entardecer
Sede perdida Pedra ferida Longo desvanecer
Fernanda F. Rocha
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2005-11-17 03:59:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Desvanecer
(User Rating: 1 ) by enigma on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 11:42:36 AM AEST (User
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Fernanda,
...I am absolutely ecstatic...tingly...goose-bumpy...I knew there wasn't a mask in existence that could intimidate your Beauty!!!
...just wonderful...I am wordless...touché...
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Re: Desvanecer
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 05:58:16 AM AEST (User
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Though I understood very little, great beauty shone through.
Take care.
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