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knight in shining armor
Contributed by
emokid
on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 06:31:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A sad little girl
sitting alone
on a park bench
her head in her hands
crying her eyes out
she is ashamed
of her life
how its spiraling
out of her control
hello its me
your knight
in shining armor
I'm here to save
so princess dry
dry your eyes
youre safe
she said tell me
how does a life
come to this
Ive been raped
abused, broken,
my mother doesnt care
my father is a drunk
I cant live like this
with scars on my wrist
hello its me
your knight
in shining armor
I'm here to save
so princess dry
dry your eyes
youre safe
Smiling with one
swift movement
she slices my throat
while I carry her away
on my white horse
the last thing I see
is the sunset
with her smiling
laughing at my feeble
attempts to save someone
who never wanted to be saved
hello its me
your knight
in shining armor
I'm here to save
so princess dry
dry your eyes
youre safe
Copyright ©
emokid
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2005-11-17 18:31:38]
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Re: knight in shining armor
(User Rating: 1 )
by fredsmith on
Thursday, 17th November 2005 @ 08:30:31 PM AEST
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sad and straight to the point
i like how oyu put it
pretty kool
anywayz 5/5 awsum
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Re: knight in shining armor
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by enigma on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 09:25:57 AM AEST
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...the story of my life...well...kind of...I never viewed myself as much more than a Don Quixote sort...my wife, unbeknowst to me, viewed me as your Knight In Shining Armor...when her rose tinted visor came off, she started her slashing...
...I'm not into this "armor stuff" anymore...
...you captured the feel of the whole thing very well...
ron...enigma |
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