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Secrets
Contributed by
silentangel
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Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 03:01:37 PM in AEST
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Secrets of a broken heart
Secrets of a broken life
Torn inside out
Pushed around
Tell me now
Can you see me alive
Hidden in a corner
Watching memories flashing by
Secrets of a broken heart
Secrets of a broken mind
Spinning faster and faster
Screaming at the top of my lungs
Tell me now
Can you see me alive
Secrets of me
Secrets of a broken heart
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silentangel
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2005-11-18 15:01:37]
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Re: Secrets
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 04:01:44 PM AEST
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very smooth write with no flaws great piece ty for posting it
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Re: Secrets
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by EverlastingDawn on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 05:43:26 PM AEST
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Very interesting poem
The flow is good
I like the build up of tension
Nice Write
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Re: Secrets
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by sprinter27 on
Friday, 18th November 2005 @ 06:48:06 PM AEST
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nice write, i truly enjoyed reading this write. it has a good flow and is written very well. great write, i really enjoyed this and i agree with you. keep up the good work!!
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