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Lucky you
Contributed by
thumbsucker
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Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 11:06:55 AM in AEST
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Baby you are so Heaven blessed.
Getting to love me must be great.
Now you`re tasting the very best.
It`s just too bad about your wieght.
So you`re the butt of my friends jokes,
say that`s when my troubles began.
Can also do without your folks.
I don`t buy soup to get the can.
Get out of the way, I can`t see the game.
Yeah, yeah, whatever. I`m not sharing mine.
Come here Cupcake. I want to stake my claim.
Babe, here comes twelve seconds of magic time.
I`m hungry. Try and make me drool.
Now Sweetie, make this place look great.
Just knowing you`re at home is cool.
Don`t wait up. I plan on being late.
I really love you psycho geek.
I hope I`ve made that clear.
There`s no need for you to speak.
I`ll say just what I want to hear.
BLAH, Blah, blah...
(you don`t deserve me and I definitely don`t deserve you)
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thumbsucker
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2002-07-25 11:06:55]
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Re: Lucky you
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by ginsdance on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 02:33:32 PM AEST
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It is funny!!! Sounds like what all my guy friends say about ME!!! Luv it. Keep 'em coming!
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Re: Lucky you
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by humphdj on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 05:10:04 PM AEST
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This is a great write because it's so unlike you. Getting inside peoples heads is diffiucult, explaining it to other is harder.
You can't help reading this and thinking " God! I never want to be even close to being like this" but maybe the twelve seconds is?
Rgds
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