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Long to Fly
Contributed by
booger
on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 01:23:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Hand me back my halo
Repair each broken wing
Redeem the graceful words
This angel longs to sing.
Un-cry the tears I've cried
Brighten my sky from grey
Put some hope beneath my wings
And I'll gladly fly away
Unstitch the smile I've sown
Make a face pure perfection
A gentle mind and thoughts
With joy in each reflection.
No burning crimsom tides
No craving for the knife
No voices cursing silently
'A pathetic, worthless life'.
Reason my existence
A reason just for me
I'm searching with blind eyes
That's why i can't see.
The light too far to reach
Temptation far too strong
This angels falling slowly
But I know I'm often wrong.
So regenerate my faith
Put sight behind each eye
Mend this broken angel
And gracefully, I'll fly
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booger
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2005-11-19 13:23:50]
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Re: Long to Fly
(User Rating: 1 )
by MandiLee on
Wednesday, 1st November 2006 @ 06:15:12 PM AEST
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| wow great poem and don't we all wish that could happen! |
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Re: Long to Fly
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by drifting_heart on
Thursday, 2nd November 2006 @ 04:58:38 PM AEST
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It was lovely..
the rhyming scheme was really on, syllable for syllable which i find really attractive to read in a poem.
the flow was not only good but the depth was there... good job. (:
-adelle |
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Re: Long to Fly
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by the_wampum_pimp on
Tuesday, 7th November 2006 @ 08:42:56 AM AEST
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Brilliant, one Of the best I've read on this site yet. My only issue is the term Un-cry, It just sounds a little too....made up. Keep up the good work.
-Mike |
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