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LIfes injection
Contributed by
mindset
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Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 05:42:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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For an old friend many words we spoke
Brothers we were a world undone
You angered in a place of many
Few ever understood
Times we shared a place so lost
Sorry now you had to go away
And now is left is our last
But I rememeber you
And all your pain so many forgot
I say now I have lost a brother
But yet I dont feel I have past
I salute the last of the dying few
My time will come and cross
Days now of longer regret
And what to have done
But you chose a world of many
And our paths were never crossed
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mindset
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2005-11-19 17:42:51]
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Re: LIfes injection
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by trini on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 07:03:31 PM AEST
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very nice write. the words seemed kinda confused though. just my opinion, it was still a great write. keep it up,
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Re: LIfes injection
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by mindset on
Saturday, 19th November 2005 @ 07:25:07 PM AEST
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