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Winter
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 07:18:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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it's much too cold where we are now
we've been here for far too long
we haven't seen the sun for weeks
and i feel like letting go
i never thought i could feel so low
where did our paths take a turn
now we're so far from home
and we stumble on faulty grounds
i know we were meant to be more than this
but we still tread waters that we've already known
and with all of the strength and all of the courage
i feel like letting go
i know i can be much better than this
and who's to say i belong in the shadows
from the darkness i want to let go
it's better this way
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AnastasiaN
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2005-11-20 07:18:18]
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Re: Winter
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 10:40:30 PM AEST
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Anastasia this is a sad, deep and very well written piece of poetry u have presented us with. You have expressed your inner thoughts and emotions so well. The flow and the rhyming are great. Chin up and may ur days ahead be much brighter. Well done on such a great write.
*heartfelt hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: Winter
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by tears_of_blood on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:40:57 PM AEST
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beauitful poem tasia really is alot of sad words but you wrote it so right days well become sunny again just you wait.
brad xoxox |
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