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falling for you
Contributed by
jheng
on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 10:01:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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you drive me to a see saw of emotions
one minute you're all charms & sweetness,
the next you don't even smile at me at all
and sometimes you even avoid me completely.
what kind of relationship do we truly have?
you seek me when you want me,
you come & treat me with sweetness
that i can help but fall in love with you.
i am becoming involved with you
more & more each day,
deeper & deeper
with each passing day.
it seems like a quicksand,
but i dont want to be saved
i want to be in your arms
even for a short while.
i know we dont belong together,
i know this wont last
but still i want to feel your kiss
and your passionate embrace.
Copyright ©
jheng
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2005-11-20 10:01:24]
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Re: falling for you
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by Skye on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 02:58:15 PM AEST
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| i like it...it's really good! |
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Re: falling for you
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 03:35:08 PM AEST
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A very in-the-moment and straight from the heart write, it seems...Nice job. I hope it works out for you two: )
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Re: falling for you
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by VJLovato on
Monday, 5th December 2005 @ 07:21:13 PM AEST
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| OMG... this is exactly what is in my mine rite now. Really good write. Keep up the good work. |
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