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These Steps
Contributed by
kareless
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 12:32:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Disillusioned by what illustrates our hopefullness.
with vivid and wild feats all about with a ringing of restlessness.
All walks of life - cross to color these streets I've been bound.
As watching an image be born, from the hands they jump lively onto solid white mass -- so silently sound.
I brace myself to face the day to walk a path to follow along.
With sudden moves of each unplanned step - a desperation to belong.
To shout each breath would be closer to truth; fitting tastefully so with the bareness, brassness and completely uncouth.
Pardons do follow close behind the newly turned earth. As but of many to make, I make again - a mistake to destroy my self worth.
Words now boldy written, for intensley less colors are fading.
As I hold tighter to this place-for once again in the distance I feel darkness pervading.
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kareless
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2005-11-21 00:32:30]
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Re: These Steps
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 01:02:39 AM AEST
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A deep and very well expressed piece of poetry.
With sudden moves of each unplanned step - a desperation to belong.
I can so much relate to these written words.
Thank you for sharing with us ur wonderful work.
*hugs*
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Re: These Steps
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by jmpy84 on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 02:52:13 AM AEST
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