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You are The One
Contributed by
jmpy84
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 02:25:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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You are the one I think of day in and day out
You are the one I cant see myself without
You are the one whos there when times are bad
When I see your face it always seems to make me glad
You are the one who brightens up my day
You are the one who always seems to find the right words to say
You are the one who always takes my breath away
Your are the one that can turn a frown upside down
You make me free and not bound
You are the one who means the world to me
I can't wait to build my life with you
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jmpy84
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2005-11-21 02:25:55]
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Re: You are The One
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 03:11:05 AM AEST
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NOW THAT'S POETRY WITH A HEART FELT DEEP WITHIN,RIGHT FROM THE START & UP TO THE VERY END! EXCELLENT WORDING!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: You are The One
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:58:39 AM AEST
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Nice write very dedicated and innocent in in sincerity, nicely done.
Ben |
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Re: You are The One
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:21:08 PM AEST
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Josh what a beautiful and heartfelt write.
I hope things go really well between u and
your girl. You deserve to be happy my friend
and I know she makes you happy. The best
to you both.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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Re: You are The One
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 07:10:21 PM AEST
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| I love this poem, feelings were expressed perfectly, I loved it. SLipSiX. Keep it up. |
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