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all casual and red dressed with glamour and seminal smiles
Contributed by
classicfailedhero
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 03:58:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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unatural inhibitors make no stance, i have cooed apathy into my lap
in life phantasmagoria has come to halt, but figures remain
trying to emulate idealistic submission, group laid insanity in a hierachy of semen
excrutiating wanton bottom participant, trying self destruction in a delapitated soul
writhing mass of sirens liken to my perception, remnants of a more erotic intent abound
you see me all red hand and sucked, wrapped in genteel inequalities
at all its best spiralling, mindful opinion are weak
object to the unseen, love the unheard
crashing out of all youth control, chorus of smiles and swelling of ideals
trailing through the air, ghosts of a very select few
they are my own stigma, but the truth being
they are just simply not apperent
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2005-11-21 03:58:12]
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Re: all casual and red dressed with glamour and seminal smiles
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by ruby_dreamer on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 04:17:22 AM AEST
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| Although your poem is impressive in structure and in vocabulary, I must admit I didn't have my dictionary handy. Perhaps you should use less difficult words? Maybe you are intending this poem to be towards a certain audience, but for a very basic person such as myself, huge words confuse me...XD |
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Re: all casual and red dressed with glamour and seminal smiles
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by loveisendless on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 06:32:18 PM AEST
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SEX,DRUGS,& ROCK & ROLL THAT HAS ALOT OF HURT ALREADY LOCKED & READY TO RELOAD! AIM HIGH,& NEVER FEEL LOW,THE BEST IS YET TO COME UP INTO THE GREAT BIG BLUE SKY-WITH NO NEED TO GET THERE BEFORE YOUR TIME!
GREAT WRITE,ALOT OF FEELINGS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DAN!
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