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I see myself in white
Contributed by
poetic_influence
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:14:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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I see myself in white
In an alter looking at you
The dark of night
Confessing our love so sweetly
Loving you so deeply
Now you only complete me
A ring on my finger took one second
For a joy in my soul that will last forever
A match made in heaven
And to prove this sint puppy love is our only goal
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Re: I see myself in white
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by Desolated_Denial on
Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 12:41:48 PM AEST
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| It's very simple, and very direct. I like it, but it seems very plain. Nothing stands out, no line shouts the emotion. I like the message, and I like that you seem to believe your message |
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