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Where Is My Place?
Contributed by
scotsgirl
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Monday, 21st November 2005 @ 10:39:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Walking in a contradicting circle
Leading me nowhere
Where are the answers?
When I finally have time to care
We are so lost
Yet are the ones who are found
And I have become blind
Or have I dug myself underground?
My struggles didn't matter
So why should yours?
Blinded off track
I didn't even know I was off course
I don't have the answers
And life doesn't make sence
Where do I come in?
How do I make a difference?
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scotsgirl
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2005-11-21 22:39:17]
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Re: Where Is My Place?
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 04:18:02 AM AEST
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Re: Where Is My Place?
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 01:00:40 PM AEST
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Good emotional thought in this write...The flow was a bit shaky here and there, and you may want to double check for spelling next time, but still a nice job. Keep up the writes!
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