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me without you
Contributed by
mjh0813
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Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 09:43:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
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you say your afraid because of my age
but you say you love me
i know im young
but what would i be without you?
me without you is like...
a bird without wings
how would i fly if i didnt have you?
your my wings
your my bestfriend but yet
your the guy i want to spend the rest of my life with
is it so wrong to want to be with you?
or to have you hold me?
is it so wrong to want to be with someone 5 years older?
im not sure but i love you and i dont want to be without you
you make me feel so beautiful
you make me think im worth something
you make me feel so special
you make me feel so alive
ever since you have been there i cant help but have a smile all the time
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2005-11-22 09:43:01]
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Re: me without you
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 02:07:58 PM AEST
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awwwwwww this is so sweet! nice poem..
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Re: me without you
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 04:05:45 PM AEST
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A very well written and deeply expressed poem. I would really like to see your poem when it's finished. A heartfelt write that draws the reader into reading the poem from start to finish. I wish u all the best of luck. If it's meant to be then it'll sort itself out. Goodluck.
*hugs*
~sue~ |
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