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New Poem
Contributed by
liquidsunshine
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Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 07:02:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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Come and kiss me where a warm wind
Plays across my skin and slips
Into my heart that skips in turn
Cause I can control the blue of my eyes
But only you can care to notice
And you notice and it takes my surprise
If you have them, dont let me see
Your uneasiness, the nerves
Inside your words and deeds
Cause Im so fragile and so chill
But I cant be chill any longer
Than a nervous hearts weak will
Just go slow and let it all relax
So Im not rushed or scared
By what Ive dared to do
The way Ive moved on so readily
And I know Ill get jumpy
But if Im jumpy, please help steady me
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2005-11-22 19:02:05]
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Re: New Poem
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by AnastasiaN on
Tuesday, 22nd November 2005 @ 08:30:47 PM AEST
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| wow that's a really cool play you've made on words. and in a way i can totally relate...awesome job. |
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Re: New Poem
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 01:43:10 AM AEST
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It's good to see you writing again Chels. This was such a "mellow" write. It's simple and yet it brings you so much.
Lovely write.
Jane~ |
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Re: New Poem
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:41:18 AM AEST
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It's sweet, calm, I'm not sure how to explain it. It's a poem that one would read to their loved one in the park on a sunny day. Well, that;s how my mind saw it.
Well done, friend.
Take care.
David |
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Re: New Poem
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by jessejames on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 10:13:33 PM AEST
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| nice poem you should check out outlaw_mutiny youd like his work |
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Re: New Poem
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Saturday, 10th December 2005 @ 10:26:29 AM AEST
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| nice poem i wish i could write like that |
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Re: New Poem
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by lifefliesby on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:14:41 PM AEST
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amazing wirte. made me remember times I had w/ someone special. great times. not only times I'll never forget but that show no signs of ever fading from my memories.
great write chels. keep it up.
love,
Jared J |
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