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promise of a friend
Contributed by
mindless-wish
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 04:09:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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just to bleed,
i have to cry
sparkling pain
i have to hide
washed away
no more to say
end of end
cant pretend
good-bye for now
and still i care
to let you know
ill meet you there
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mindless-wish
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2005-11-23 04:09:18]
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Re: promise of a friend
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by Kano on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:00:51 AM AEST
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| Wow, what an emotional write, very well done |
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Re: promise of a friend
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by Fernanda_F_Rocha on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:19:49 AM AEST
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You didnt need many words to express so much...very good work!
LadyMoon |
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Re: promise of a friend
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 05:28:46 AM AEST
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| Feel bit sad reading this but well done for getting so much feeling into such a small amount of words. x |
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Re: promise of a friend
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by Sophie_Taylor on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:01:27 PM AEST
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great poem!!
keep up the great writing!!
Sophie xoxo |
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Re: promise of a friend
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by coolbreeze17 on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 02:47:32 AM AEST
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very ..wow....!!!!
AWESOME WRITE!!!
so much emotion!!! |
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