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Contributed by
tinyone
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Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
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this time ill show them
this time there wrong
this time im stronger
this time my beat is from a different song
this time will be better
it wont end in tears'
this time im happy
ive conquered my fears
this time its different
im a changed person now
this time they'll be shocked
my senses came around
this time its not you
this time its someone else
sorry our love ended but i fell for a different
spell
so no longer will they hurt me
i no longer care
i cant hear them talk because to me there no there
so this is the end of the journey with you
i wish i can say i enjoyed it but my happiness was very few
this time its simple its not complicated or dull
this time im truly happy
im saying good bye to you
this time im a changed person.... but what i wanted to change i havent changed at all
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2003-01-23 11:00:00]
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by Unaekseveer1 on
Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 08:03:38 AM AEST
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Angie,
From the passion you have in here, I can tell that you do care very much indeed and although this often brings us much pain I'm convinced it's the right way to be.
So I wouldn't change if I was you!
Great write by the way, like I said it's passionate.
With love
Dean:-) |
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