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Poor Substitute For Love
Contributed by
His_Infernal_Majesty
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Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 07:04:52 PM in AEST
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So drunk, one of the worst ways to go.
Why then does it feel so good?
Is it the escape, The Promise... No
Drowning the heartbreak in Alcahol?
The substitute's taken over me, since you've left.
You left me. I never did know why,
You just left, never so much as a face to face good bye.
Not even a reason Why.
Your friend had to break the news,
And I cant help but cry over the way I was used.
I loved you more than I ever knew I Could Love.
I Loved You, Loved You, Loved You, My Love.
So here's to you, I hope your happy.
Even if its not with Me.
I'll take this drink and pretend my love is dead.
But even this substitute cant provide my escape.
I can't let go my love.
I love you to Much.
So here's To you,
The wine, The Blood.
Copyright ©
His_Infernal_Majesty
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2005-11-23 19:04:52]
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Re: Poor Substitute For Love
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by trini on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:07:06 PM AEST
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not bad. a little scattered, but what can you expect when writing and drinking, i think you did quite well. keep up the good work
-trini |
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Re: Poor Substitute For Love
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 08:11:40 PM AEST
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I think you did good for someone who
is drinking!! keep up the good work... |
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Re: Poor Substitute For Love
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by BEBE on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 10:25:31 PM AEST
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I loved it.. not the fact that you were drinkling but your writing is so lovely.
GODBLESS
BEBE
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Re: Poor Substitute For Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 11:09:05 PM AEST
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| i'm recording a demo is it ok if i use this song? its a great poem |
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Re: Poor Substitute For Love
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by mindless-wish on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 02:32:27 AM AEST
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| awesome poem says alot your a really good writer and it shows that even when your drunk you can still write something great |
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Re: Poor Substitute For Love
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by tortured_soul on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 03:30:55 PM AEST
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*wipes away a tear* one word, beautiful. I know how it feels to have your heart smashed into the ground.
P.S. thanx for the positive remark on my poem, 'Seconds Til Death'. |
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