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my heart
Contributed by
tinyone
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Thursday, 23rd January 2003 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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my heart feels a bit broken, and i dont know why.
i fell for you from hello's and goodbye's/
i keep thinking one day, that you'll be mine and things will change
why did you come up to me if you were taken, she cant be keepin you happy,
if you kickin game, and if you love her, why put her through this pain?this seems a lil strange.
people tell me to keep away, and it just pulls me closer to your direction.
some give me advice like dont think of him when your time is wasting... be with him..
im scared of being hurt, i want to be with you. just change a lil, fall for me like i fell for you.
brake up with your girl, and make me yours.
make my heart together again, pick up those pieces that fell along the way.
my battle with love is taking too long and i can no longer wait,
make your descion so we can start our relationship on a upcoming date,
i pretend i dont care and if i dont see you for a while, i stop thinkin of you as much..
but i have to realize that reality is more harsh than daydreams of me being my crush.
the longer you take the more i begin to feel no hope, i start to hesistate.
i have to open my eyes and realize you not mine
im no longer gonna intrude on another girl's thing,
my heart feels a bit broken and i dont know why
i fell for you from hello's and goodbye's
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2003-01-23 11:00:00]
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Re: my heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Unaekseveer1 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 07:52:47 AM AEST
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Hi Angie,
This is a very sad poem/story with lots of emotions jumping off the page at the reader. I would imagine that this would strike a chord with many, many people I know it does with me!
I like this
With love
Dean;-) |
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