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Imagined Vacation
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
on
Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 10:34:23 PM in AEST
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StoryPoetry
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Well it happened to be That on this day Jarred popped over He wanted to play
Now the game on his mind Was one I found strange And despite my fears His mind would not change
Next thing I knew I was up in the air To look over the edge I did not dare
Within the balloon I was up so high And I couldn't help But heave a sigh
For as I clunng To the basket floor All I could dream up Was touching ground once more
Then our Irish friend Whom we all adore Started talking of states With ranches galore
And this image so lovely Got stuck in my head Of an Irish cowboy One named Jarred
So with a giggle I returned to the ground And suddenly realized The courage I'd found
So thanks to our Imaginations I'm finally ready For an airborn vacation
Copyright ©
Kie-Kie
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2005-11-23 22:34:23] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Imagined Vacation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:35:33 AM AEST (User
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Now that was a very very nice poem, Kiela. That crazy Jarred, though scaring you like that. Just kidding Jarred. Glad it had a happy ending and all worked out for the best.
I'd have to say very briiliant imagery because you had me right there with you clingy onto the basket floor. Awesome flight, Kiela.
Thank you for sharing this.
Tim
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Re: Imagined Vacation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:25:52 PM AEST (User
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fun filled write just what the doctor ordered thanks for the smile..Eddy |
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Re: Imagined Vacation
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 01:50:44 PM AEST (User
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Good work friend.
Don't know how I missed this one.
Huggs, blessings,
emy |
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Re: Imagined Vacation
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th December 2011 @ 03:58:39 PM AEST (User
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Love it. Brought a smile to my ol' face. :) |
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