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The Last Time
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 02:58:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
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And you sit there, you wonder why I won't look you in the eyes
You don't know me, and I'm the one alone who cries
You say you care, but you don't remember the past
You won't let it be, and this will be the last
the last time I cry for you
the last time I sit by you
the last time I hurt for you
the last time, the last time
And I sit here, and I want to know the truth
But I hate you, and wonder how you had the couth
I shed a tear, I can't call you my sister
And it was taboo, even if you'd been a mister
the last time I listen to you
the last time I feel for you
the last time I believe in you
the last time, the last time
And you'll never know how much you took
And you'll never know how much I shook
And you'll never know how much I hurt
And you'll never care, cause your a pervert
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2005-11-24 02:58:30]
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Re: The Last Time
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by Angelic_Demon on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 02:56:33 PM AEST
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Aww, I don't know what your sister did to you, but wow. This poem is strong and has a lot of meaningful words in here... It's good. I like it.
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Re: The Last Time
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 03:15:10 PM AEST
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Wow indeed. An extremely emotional write and even quite lyrical in parts. Its been a long time since we last talked, hun, but I'm still here for you and always will be. Hope to see you soon :)
Take Care
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Re: The Last Time
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by DarkFaerie on
Wednesday, 15th February 2006 @ 09:08:58 PM AEST
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| i think the only words that caputure this poem are WOW. strong emotions. |
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