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The Poor Box
Contributed by
mangos
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Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 12:24:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The poor box
Collects funds
Suggestions
On how to turn it all around
To subsidize the love
Allocated
Evenly distributed
Fairly gotten
Earned on merit
Produced by effort
Paid for on credit
Come one come all
To the daydream
Enter with no risk
Bountiful is the respect
A safe-haven
Hidden from common sense
A number-two pencil
Bubble the circle
Enter your social
Your name is impartial
The poor box
Is not sentimental
Hardly rational
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mangos
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2005-11-24 12:24:14]
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Re: The Poor Box
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 12:12:07 PM AEST
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Geez...this is a rather gloomy piece...Hardly optimistic. I'm undecided on whether I like the second, or third stanza best. Your thoughts are hard-hitting in this write, and that ending is pretty blunt.
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