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Dusty Road Of Sin
Contributed by
justinblue
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Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 07:33:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Iv'e lost focus I am loosing the fear The wrong bumpy road is where I steer I've desperately struggled my way out of the dark abyss My soul the devil does miss Demons persistantly dragging,pushing,pulling me back Back to a place where inner joy and peace I lack Old habits slowly slithering there way in Leading me down the dusty road of sin I have the power to stop it now I must not give up and through in the towell once I cruised the back roads of hell And over and over again all I did was fail Then I got aboard and rode the life train with everything to gain Now once again I'm on the verge of destruction And I have'nt even finished my reconstruction Todays a sad day Because of my recent actions I may pay Please my mighty father Forgive me I have'nt been what you want me to be I'm sorry I left you, and for my own will I do Pease help guide and direct me in the right way Help me find my way back to the smooth straight highway I'm scared so damn scared My life before I never cared I'ts been so long since I've been scared I love you Lord Life without you I can't afford
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Re: Dusty Road Of Sin
(User Rating: 1 ) by pondering_poetess on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:27:29 PM AEST (User
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Temptation is a nasty demon that never leaves us for long. You are seeking in the right direction to find guidance to help keep you from traveling down the dusty road of sin once again. This was a brilliant plea and expression of how easy it is to be misdirected through life. Nicely written. |
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Re: Dusty Road Of Sin
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 12:53:28 AM AEST (User
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Wonderful write. Love how you are able to put so much emotion into this. I can relate to this a little. Helps me understand where my sister is coming from. Good luck w/your life and never give up. Thans for sharing this w/us. Really puts things in perception for me |
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