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Hurt
Contributed by
manders
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Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 10:06:51 PM in AEST
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Hurt by the things you say that make me want to go away.
I'm now in pain and driving me insane.
I want to cry,
I want to die,
But I don't want to say goodbye.
Now I lie in bed wishing I was dead.
I say I love you and hope deep inside you love me too.
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manders
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2005-11-24 22:06:51]
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Re: Hurt
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by Zanobia on
Thursday, 24th November 2005 @ 11:12:54 PM AEST
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| short yet effective. cool. |
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Re: Hurt
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 12:44:59 AM AEST
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| Ah, to love somebody who you don't know if they love you back. Painful and sad. Not wanting to give up b/c just maybe they feel the same. I know this feeling very well. Hope this person tells you how they feel. Glad to know i'm not alone on this. Good write. Thanks for sharing |
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Re: Hurt
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 03:13:34 PM AEST
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It's very brief and to the point... good job. The anger
and sadness is mostly definitely felt and I hope that
you get by and get stronger too.
Take care! and keep up the good work. |
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