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--where the hell are you--
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 03:22:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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you closed the door
my whole body itches
should i follow you?
go tearing down the darkened streets
you're mad but you'll be back
won't you?
i find your phone and your car keys
i am lost without you
-biting my hands, they're bleeding-
i can't stand the anticipation
my throat is horse with your name
feet calloused, hands numb and scabbed
--where the hell are you--
it's been hours since i began
tonight-chasing you-
but it's been years-since i lost you-
--where the hell are you--
Copyright ©
weepingprophet
... [
2005-11-25 03:22:00]
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Re: --where the hell are you--
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 03:44:59 AM AEST
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| as much a mystery as your other writes, but brilliant none-the-less |
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Re: --where the hell are you--
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by deathbringer on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 08:45:23 AM AEST
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"it's been hours since i began
tonight-chasing you-
but it's been years-since i lost you-"
it's just brilliant.the poem's full of regrets.excelent work
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Re: --where the hell are you--
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by sweetpixiegrl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:29:20 AM AEST
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another awsome poem. i am mesmerized by your writings. may i email you... i feel the need to know you!
kelli
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