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Achilles’ Mother's Mind
Contributed by
AmyLee4Ever
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Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 01:35:41 PM in AEST
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My heart is shredded
I do know his fate
I am his helpless mother
My mind is irate
From these emotions I act
I dont let him perish
I look to disguise him
And be allowed to still cherish
I dress him with gowns
He becomes unfamiliar
All can be fooled with this
Hes not the least bit peculiar
All of the world will stay tricked
I can now hold him forever
My son is my heart
Without him, I am set to sever
The wise Odysseus
I see out my window
He is close to my son
This sight is to foreshadow
The women dance around him
My son cradles his weapons
Odysseus knows its him
I see my son now only through illusions
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AmyLee4Ever
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2005-11-25 13:35:41]
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Re: Achilles’ Mother's Mind
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by Kano on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 02:01:17 PM AEST
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| Cool good write, I love mythology and I like the way you did this poem. |
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Re: Achilles’ Mother's Mind
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 09:45:09 PM AEST
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OMG where have u been girl? I've missed u and ur wonderful poetry. Great to have u back.
A great write as always. I love mythology. You've presented this one so well. Cleverly done as you also captivate ur reader from start to finish. Well done.
*hugs*
~sue~
PS. I hope that all is well with u. |
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Re: Achilles’ Mother's Mind
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by itsmesowhatofit on
Wednesday, 15th November 2006 @ 07:51:36 PM AEST
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| A deep and moving piece, dedicated to love from a motehr to their son, the same can be said for any relati onship, hold on to that love forever! |
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