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Goat Song
Contributed by
Jane_Doe
on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 04:54:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Goat Song I feel you
Creep through my flesh
Paining my being
Making a mess
Goat Song I feel you
Blacken my soul
Tasting my sadness
Eating me whole
Goat Song I feel you
Tear at my heart
Forcing me loveless
Take me apart
Goat Song I feel you
Hallow me out
Stealing the things that
I can't live without
Goat Song you've left me
With nothing to feel
So hard to explain
Something so real
Copyright ©
Jane_Doe
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2005-11-25 16:54:30]
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Re: Goat Song
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by sojourner on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 05:32:59 PM AEST
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Very good poem from the beginning to the end.
your words moved strongly from verse to verse as you move to the last verse and your heart is torn from you and all the love stored
within.
sojourner, |
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Re: Goat Song
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by graci on
Friday, 25th November 2005 @ 06:05:52 PM AEST
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| moving! |
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Re: Goat Song
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by Xnoybis on
Saturday, 26th November 2005 @ 01:54:37 AM AEST
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| Nice one. Just remember we all sing our own song, and it isn't always as tightly structured as a radio hit. The more you move in one direction opens up that much more space to go in the other. |
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Re: Goat Song
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by northernlights on
Monday, 5th April 2010 @ 08:11:59 AM AEST
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| Stealing the things that I can't live without....very powerful moving poem, leaving you with the tragedy of feeling nothing |
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